▶ Your Answer :
There might be some people who believe that
rapid development has many advantages to affect the society. However, I
disagree with this above idea for two subsequent reasons. First, people get
lots of stress because of the society of quick development. Second, rapid
development is not good for people’s relationships.
First of all, people have a lot of stress
these days. To be specific, today, people are living in busy and competitive
society because everything in this society is developing quickly, such as
technology and education. According to the recent survey done by Korean
institution of Society, 89% of people said they were depressed and got lots of
stress. In fact, most of them had a busy lifestyle to survive in this society.
Moreover, stress makes people have a bad
relationship with each other. Let me bring my personal experience as an
example. I had a friend named Jonny. He was my best friend and our relationship
was great. One day, the professor gave us an assignment and it was really hard
to get a good score. I was tired to do it so I asked Jonny to ask some help.
However, he was also tired and he got a lot of stress because he had to get a
better grade than others, even better than me. So he ignored my help and he
yelled at me. In short, our relationship was broken.
To sum up, people get lots of stress and
their relationship is going worse because of the rapid development of the
society. All in all, I firmly disagree with the above statement that rapid
development affects society positively. |