▶ Your Answer : Newspapers are written by various people in different perspective. People nowadays usually rely on online newspaper. In this case, people can read only one view of report from company of banner. However I believe we have to accept newspaper from different people in different views. There are several reasons. First of all, newspaper is the most objective media but it has limit because newspaper is also written by people. If you subscribe more than two kinds of newspaper in one country,. you can find the differences. They report same article in different views even sometimes it is definitely opposite. Usually in politic matters we can find this case and it is serious when the news is about global matters. When I was a freshman, I was am in the class and the name was is global leadership. In this class, I learned about similar case like this. It was about the accident of Korean airplane in San Francisco airport. Indeed this case was not about the complex relationship between two countries such as United States and Israel, but, all countries reported this situation in various ways. We can understand enough by a photo they captured not even we have to read the article. Secondly, as I say at the top, we can know about the importance of various perspective. If we accept only a few vew of matters, the hight of thought are shorter than now and it is more serious than now. Moreover, we can not communicate with other people who are in other views. For these reasons, I believe we have to read article by different people for our widening communication skills. To receive all kinds of views is effective to us.
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첫번째 본문 -because 뒤에 주어 (newspaper)에 대한 동사 필요. is -문장 부호 오류 -문맥상 과거이므로 am-->was, is-->was -문장 두개 I was in th class / the name was global leadership 아무것도 없이 이을 수 없습니다. 중간에 등위접속사 and 넣어주세요. -등위접속사로 쓰인 but은 쉼표를 but 앞에 씁니다. -줄친 부분 불필요합니다.
두번째 본문 -철자 오류 -파란 부분 이해할 수 없습니다. -cannot 붙여 씁니다.
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