▶ Your Answer :
It is debatable whether people should only tell true the truth to their friends. This is an intriguing
question because opinions concerning this issue can be different relying on the
individual perspectives. However, in my opinion, I support that people cannot
say honestly be honest to their friends all
the time.
To begin with, to always
tell sincerely be honest all the time is not
helpful to build relationships. In fact, there is the time to lie for friends.
If they do not lie, their relations can worsen
seriously. There was a poll conducted by the Korean board of education in 2015,
with 200 students as respondents. The purpose of the survey was to understand
the consensus view about telling true the truth
at all times. An overwhelming 87% replied that always being honest to their
friends was not a good way to maintain close
relationships, since they could give a serious damage on their friends, (comma로 끊지 말고 이어서
써주세요) when they told everything without regard. This shows that they have a
negative view about telling talking frankly
all the time to their friends. (솔직하게 얘기하는 걸 꺼려하는 게 아니라, 항상 솔직하게 얘기하는
걸 꺼려하는 거라고 적어주세요. 두 입장은 매우 다릅니다)
On top of that, honestly
saying always being honest is not always
beneficial for their friends. Sometimes, it is needed to lie for their morale.
For example, I will talk about my experience to illustrate this point. My best
friend was very timid, so she was not good at speaking in front of the public.
She always concerned about other feedbacks and reactions. If others said that she was too passive and it was difficult
to understand her speaking, she became excessively
inactive and she could not say only one a
word. I often cheered her up and I told her that she had a good ability to
speak. Even though I told a lie to her, she could gain a confidence.
Finally, she practiced presentation presenting
every day, and eventually she could develop her
speaking ability day by day. This proves that occasionally telling a lie
can help them to change their weakness.
All
thing considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding this topic has
been effectively and precisely delivered with the reasons mentioned above.
Never should we forget this issue may have a huge impact on our future
Writing
0-30 Score Scale |
Fair (17-23) |
Score |
19 |
Overall
Comment: |
문법 오류들은 위 문장을 확인해
주세요. Comma를 과도하게 사용하시는 습관이 있으시니 주의하세요. 본론 첫 문단과 두 번째 문단의 주장이 매우 상이합니다. |
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