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When there were no devices, most probably has imagined themselves in a certain imaginary world and thought the best outcome the scenario can have. It was fun to think who is stronger, which one is faster, or what the better option is. At some points, people lost touch with the imagination. Today's topic, however, brought the interest back. Today's topic I prefer working at home to commuting to my workplace is difficult to make a choice, but if I must, I would disagree with the topic for two reasons. First, working in workplace enables people to learn how cooperate with each other. Second, people can have a strong relationship.
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To begin with, working in workplace can be more beneficial for people because they can learn how to cooperate with each other. As work together, they can work efficiently and skillfully because they can have a chance to better solve matters than work alone. Since they can learn how to solve various problem from other people on workplace, they can more productive. For example, when my father was working in home. He was not good at work because he worked always alone. However, after commuting to workplace, he learned how to cooperate with each other and eventually, he could solve problem from other people's supportive effort and got a lot of accomplishments on his work. it had such a huge influence me that I believe working on workplace allows people to learn cooperate each other.
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In addition, working in workplace encourages people to build a strong relationship. By commuting to their workplace, people can have make a friend because they can have a chance to meet same people regularly. Since they can meet often, worker can build a strong relationship with each other and make a number of friends. For example, when I was working in my home and I was a programmer. I had no friends because I worked always alone. However, after working on my workplace, I can have a chance to meet same people and eventually I could make a number of friend. This helped me build a strong relationship with other people. The example clearly illustrates that working on workplace enables people to build a strong relationship.
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Not having other necessary factors to imagine it was difficult to make a choice. However, I decided to disagree on the topic. Not only is first factor working on workplace enables people to learn how cooperate each other important, but the second factor working on workplace allows people to build a strong relationship I decided to present is crucial. Had it not been for the essay, I never could have had a chance to consider these factors to prove its point.
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