Some people think that parents should not encourage their children to take a part-time job. However, I do not agree with the above statement because working a part time job helps them to have a sense of independence and responsibility.
To begin with, young people should learn how to live independently. The world is becoming more and more competitive so people who rely on others will eventually fall behind. Instead of being blamed for being dependent, it is better to have chances to live without the helps from their parents. According to a study by the Ministry of Labor, many young employees who have never experienced part-time jobs working are more likely to fail on getting to get their jobs in the first a few years of their trying. On the other hand, young employees who are experienced most of their counter parts with working careers tend to get their jobs much earlier(easily sounds better). This shows that part-time jobs help young workers have competitiveness (It does not give competitiveness but advantages).
On top of that, part-time jobs help children to be responsible. While working, they learn that they should not be late at work and spend times and efforts in order to earn money. This will lead them to have more sincere attitudes toward their academics. According to a research by the Ministry of Education, students who have worked part-time jobs show better performances. (It would be better if this sentence came before the example as it links the relationship between the responsibilities needed ar a work place and the responsibilities needed in school) They are not likely to be late at classes and do their best to make the deadline of their assignments compared to others. This indicates that students with job experiences are more responsible.
To sum up, when children take a part-time job, they become independent and responsible. In this regard, I believe that it is good for parents to encourage their children to have working experiences.
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