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I assume that many students study science during they are in school
years mandatorily. Many people believe that
studying science is important for students. However, I have a different idea. When it comes to the statement that
all university students should be required to take basic science course, I
certainly disagree. There are two reasons why I feel this way.
First of all, I disagree with the mandatory science lecture in the
university because it is more efficient to focus on one field. As I said
earlier, all most of all high school graduates should have
studied science in school as a requisite and I
believe that it was not a good memory. For example, I studied science
when I was in high
school for 3 years as mandatory and I can't remember anything about it. Each
students have their has his or her
own preference in studying. Some students like to study math, others prefer to
study arts, and the others may love to
study language. However, if students are required to take mandatory science
course despite of their preference, they will not like it and it is very likely
that they don't won’t focus on their
science class. It is a wasting waste of
money. (매우 주관적인 내용들이 많습니다. 객관적인 예시나 주장을 하시는
게 좋아요. 설문조사나, 연구내용과 같은 예시들을 활용해
주세요)
On top of that, I think that science is not as important as people might
assume. Many people think that science is the most
important area of contemporary days because it has been actually very helpful
for our society. (모순적입니다. 중요하지 않다고 생각한다고 하셨지만, 실제로 정말 사회에 많은 도움을 줬다, 라고 적으셨어요.) But, I think that
science is not important for normal people except for scientists. As I said earlier, I studied science for 3 years in
high school. But I've never used the knowledge that I learned after I graduated
high school. This is because i don't have to, even in university. Of course it
is important to study science for the students who who's whose dream is to be a scientist, but, for other
students, science is just another difficult course.
In summary, I assert that mandatory science
class is not efficient, and learning science is not useful for lots of
people. For those reasons I believe that mandatory science class in
university is not a good idea. Instead the university should give more
opportunities for students to seek their field
of interesting interest.
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