▶ Your Answer :
In the given a set of materials, the reading and the lecture both deal with whale strandings. The lecturer challenges the reading passage’s argument that there are a few probable reasons why whales strandings take place. First of all, the author contends that whale strandings result from wind patterns. In contrast, the lecturer refutes the claim by saying that there are diversity wind patterns in the world. For example, the eastern coast of the United States has winds away from land. Thus, the statement the author insists is false. Second, the writer insists that illness attribute to whale stradings. Speaker, however, rebuts the argument by asserting that healthy whales are often coming ashore. To be specific, if sick and weak whales back to the ocean, they would have been stranded again. However, many of the stranded whales go to the sea by swimming because they are healthy. So, the notion the writer maintains is erroneous. Finally, the article argues that geological features bring about whale strandings. On the other hand, the professor counters the contention by stating that only a small number of whales in same geological features are stranded, while all whales use a similar system to navigate. Furthermore, whales that inhabit in gentle slope beach are rarely stranded. Therefore, the idea the article claims does not make sense.
Good (26–30)
본문 마지막 문장들에서, lecture 이 reading을 어떻게 반박하는지에 대한 내용이므로 본인의 의견같은 표현은 지양하는 것이 좋습니다. Thus, the lecturer insists that the statement made in the reading is false. 같은 표현으로 써주세요.
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