▶ Your Answer :There are many small companies and big companies. they have a lot of merits and weaknesses. (Make two into one sentence, why did you mention?) There are a lot of advantages when to working at big companies so I would rather work in a large company than work in a small company companies.
First of all, by working at a big company gives opportunities is able to learn diverse things. Most of large companies experienced various things. (What does it mean?) As a result, they have their ways to cope with unexpected problems. If I can learn it, (What?) it will help to improve my career. Plus, the large company has good division of labor. (What does this indicate?) For example, most small companies suffer are suffered from lack of labor, although some of fields are not my major, but I should do them instead. However, I can focus on my work in a large company.
Secondly, employees who work in a big company are able to make relationships with many people. There are a lot of skillful employees in a big company and virtually it is a good opportunity to make relationships with them. If I make good relationships with them, I can learn various things from them because most of them , they may give good chance to me. In addition, most of skillful people in a large company are veterans in their field. it is good opportunity for me to learn various things. (Need the concluding sentence)
To conclude, I strongly believe that working in a large company for these reasons because a big company provides me to improve my career and to make relationships with professional people.
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