▶ Your Answer :
In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that many local governments are considering incentives a means of stimulating economic growth. However, the lecturer gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point.
First of all, the lecturer mentions that it will not expand the tax revenue available for local investment. To be specific, overall tax revenue would often be lost because tax rebates. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that many local governments will expand the tax revenue available for local investment.
Second, the lecturer contends that using incentives can not create many new jobs for local people. This is because when companies move to another place, they compete with local existing companies. Therefore, it is no need to be created new jobs. This refutes the reading passage's claim that using incentives to attract businesses can create many new jobs for local people.
Third, the lecturer argues that it will not be helpful to the local environments. There will occur more pollution in the local places because green factory also pollute environments. This counters the reading passage's argument that it will be beneficial to the local environments, and governments can lure entrepreneurs who are interested in starting green companies.
Good: 24~30 점수: 24 일단 전체적으로 내용이 빈약해 보이는 통합형 에세이인거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요하게 보는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 서로 비교하는 지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에는 리딩과 리스닝 둘다 서로 정보 가 많이 빈약한거 같습니다. 따라서 구체적으로 주제에 대하여서 두 정보들이 어떻게 비교하는 지 서술하는 것이 좋을 거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |