▶ Your Answer : Some people believe that movies do not tell a lot about a country. However, I am opposed to it. Movies give sufficient informations about a country. There are two reasons that why I think this way. First of all, every country countries has its own distinctive movies. Also, movies show every day lives lifes in a country. To begin with, there are many types of movie productions in many countries and each of them has its own different characteristics. Movie productions have to appeal to their country’s own citizens, so they utilize some strategies. They use musics, places, actors and stories that their country’s people like. For example, we can think about Ballywood in India. Their movies are very surprising to see for the when watch them first time. They usually have fascinating musics in the movie, and most of people sing and dance in movie like musical. Also, they commonly show colorful places. (Such as?) In this sense, we can recognize people in India like vivid colors and musics. On the top of that, movies show normal lives lifes in the their country. Usually most of the movies presents a story in their own country in many reasons. (Clarify it) So movie audiences can watch common culture in the movies. Movies allow people to see their own food, clothings, school lives lifes and so on. For example, My friend Sunwoo went to a lot of countries. He said he always went go to cinema in the country, because he can learn many things about their culture in movies. He could also usually get informations about local cuisines. In fact, he rarely failes (Meaning?) to select local cuisine. In this case, we can not deny movies have a lot of informations about a country.
To sum up, I firmly believe movies tell abundant things about a country for two reasons. Each countries’ movie productions has its own characteristics. Also they illustrate common lives lifes in their country.
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- 셀 수 없는 명사인 clothing, information에는 -s로 붙여쓰이지 않습니다.
- Spelling error 가 종종 보입니다. - 두 번째 내용에서는 went to countries~보다는 have visited/ have been to * for a trip 로 정정해주시는 것이 좋습니다. 또한 movie cinema에 가는 것이 여행에 어떠한 도움이 되는지 보다 매끄럽게 연결해주셔야겠습니다.
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