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It is debatable whether which one among the followings should be the prior ability for the high school teacher; the ability to give students advice on future, the ability to help students when they need help, or the ability to encourage students to teach themselves outside of the classroom. This is an intriguing question because priority may be different relying depending on individuals' perspectives. In my opinion, however, I support that giving students advice on their future career is the most important one compared to anything else for the following reasons. for the following two subsequent reasons.
First of all, the high school teachers are pioneers. To be specific, they have gone through the same situation as the students now have at early in their life and somehow they have managed to become a teacher, which is one of the well-respected jobs. They can tell the students what problems they had when they were at the same age and also tell them other student's stories. This can be possible because they have experienced various types of students. Students also know about the fact that teachers have more experiences on giving an advice for the future career than their parents or friends. This has been proved by the Seoul National University Communication Team. Their survey was about selecting the most influential person when making a future decision. The number of participants was 2,700 people who are students of Seoul National University. The most scored option was the high school teacher with 48% and the following was the parents 32%. One of the participants said that this was because high school teachers have more sources about the universities such as what are the requirements for the schools they wanted to go.
On top of that, other things, such as helping students when they need help or encouraging students to teach themselves outside of the classroom, can be done by others. What it means is that it does not have to be a teacher who does this. In case of advising future career, however, it is a field for a teacher. This is because we usually spend many hours in school from 8 AM to 10 PM. So they spend many of a day together and know what students are in need of at that age. Also, as a teacher, he/she may know about the interests that the students are in so they can tell the students and advice them what to do for the future career. For example, I had a teacher who knew a lot about me during the high school period. I talked to him a lot about my interest in physics and he told me the things I can do if I major physics in university. This led me to dream about the life with the physics, overall I am working as a physics-based engineer. Without his advice, I might not have become the engineer.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that giving students advice on their future career is the most important ability that the high school teacher should have. All things considered, it is my belief that my argument has been conveyed effectively and precisely with the supporting ideas.
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