▶ Your Answer : According to the reading, there are many benefits to give incentives to companies. On the contrary, the lecturer argues that luring companies with incentives has drawbacks. He refutes each point made in the passage. First, the reading passage points out that the local government will get more tax revenue. Nevertheless, the professor denies such points by positing that the overall tax income will decrease. According to a study conducted by a university, Total tax revenue will decrease because of the tax rebate.
Another point that passage puts emphasis on is that the incentives would lead to more jobs for locals. However, the speaker rejects this point by saying that the number of local workers can decreases. To be specific, the companies moving to the local area will compete with existing businesses. Thus, it can be lead to downsizing of current companies. Also, the businesses might bring their original employee when they come.
Finally, the reading material asserts that it will give benefits to the environment of the local. On the other hand, the lecturer contradicts this statement by mentioning that it may bring about more pollution. Professor says that even if the green factories emit small pollutions, it still cause pollute. Hence, only if the current contaminations are replaced, they can improve their environment.
Good: 24~30 점수: 24 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 에세이가 얼마나 설득력 있게 리딩과 리스닝이 서로 비교하고 반박하는 지 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리스닝에 대한 정보는 부족함 없이 잘 서술되어 있지만 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 따라서 리딩에 대한 정보를 더 서술해주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |