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The reading passage contends that the sad discovery of whales lying helplessly on the beach why these standings happen. On the other hands, the lecturer brings up several points that contradict this argument.
First of all, the speaker argues that, for example, whale come ashore on the east coast in the United States. They were followed from only the west coast flow away from land. This casts doubts on the reading which states that whales may become stranded because of wind patterns.
In addition, according to the speaker, if most whale sick or weak, many volunteers help them for whales' health. a Whale can easier regain their health. This rebuffs the reading passage’s assertion that whales are coming ashore due to illness.
The final point made by the lecturer is that whale’s sonar beam is navigation for their way. Because they spurt sonar beam, they can know that distance between their and land and they can avoid an obstacle. This refutes reading passage’s argument that the geological features of certain coastlines may cause whales to become disoriented.
Good: 24~30 점수: 24 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 어떻게 반박을 하는 지를 보는 것이 통합형 에세이의 기본적인 원칙인데 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리딩에대한 문장을 한 문장으로만 하였습니다. 따라서 좀 더 리딩에 대한 정보를 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |