▶ Your Answer : The reading passage states that fish farms make many drawbacks while the listening passage refutes this idea by providing several counterexamples. To begin with, the writer asserts that the first problem is the spread of sea lice. Specifically, sea lice spread quickly due to cramped environ. It was carried outside and attach to wild fish. Conversely, the lecture contradicts this idea by stating that sea lice is managed. With more detail, small fish eats lice and small number can completely solve the trouble. Furthermore, the author contends that overhavest of marine resources is the trouble. Following the statment, lices fed to captive fish. Itis thought to be require 3kgto 1kg farmed fish. In contrast, the speaker belies this claim by mentioning that marine organisms are not reduced. Feed systems eliminate waste and use plant-based protein. Moreover, the passage claims that fish escape and devastae the eco-environment. They swim free of confines outcompeting local species. On the contrary, the lecturer re buts this point by stating that escape is avoided. People grow them in land-based protein. So, there is no way to leave the place.
Good: 24~30 점수: 26 지적할 부분이 없는 통합형 에세이인거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 자신만의 의견을 가지고 서로를 비교하고 반박하는 지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에는 이러한 부분을 아주 잘 충족 시키는 에세이인거 같습니다. 각 이유에 대하여서 리딩이나 리스닝 둘 다 설명을 아주 잘 하고 있느 거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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