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Some people might say that people always have to tell the truth. However, in my opinion, it causes adverse effect on them because they would be gotten bad reputations, and someone might be wounded heart. for the following two subsequent reasons. To begin with, telling the truth excessively might give big psychological injury to others might bring about a big psychological injury. Truth may be not always good. Some people was shocked by honest saying although it is really truth true. A behavior to maintain good relationships with others may break relationships which keep for a long time. So, when telling the truth we must be cautious. For example, I will take an example myself, when I was in University, I had a very closed friend, my roommate. He asked to me about his appearance. In that period, I tend to speak immediately, not think one more not thinking again, so I told him frankly that his appearance is not attractive. After that he was very depressed for a while, I felt really sorry about him and regret it still now. As a result, I decided to not speak without twice thinking when telling the truth because it might spoil their precious bond.
On top of that, a person who always tells the truth may be given bad reputations. Not concerning about other's mind, just telling the truth would be very rude behavior. They are often considered to ruthless and impertinent people. If they want to retain good reputation continuously, it is important that keeping uncomfortable secrets themselves. For instance, there was a survey conducted by psychology majors students to 200 of University students as respondents. This survey asked whether they want to or to be always honest friends. An overwhelming 80% of responded that they are less likely to prefer to always frank speakers. Also, they says that sometimes people need to white lies. Even, some people replied that to give good impressions white lies are essential. To sum up, people have to refrain from telling the truth grossly, taking consideration about the possibility of offering deep scar and receiving bad reputation. In this regard, there are other consideration in relationship between people. 점수: 24 약간의 문법적 오류들이 있습니다. 이러한 오류들은 제가 첨삭한 것을 보시고 숙지하시길 바랍니다. 약간의 문법적 오류 이외에는 전반적으로 잘 서술된 독립형 에세이인거 같습니다. 독립형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것 중에 하나는 설득력 입니다. 전체적으로 설득력 부분에 있어서는 지금 이 에세이가 잘 서술된 거 같습니다. 각 단락들이 아주 논리적으로 자신의 의견을 잘 제시하는 거 같습니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |