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Many people think watching TV is more useful to learn. We can get many types of information and knowledge from TV. But I guess reading books have more opportunity and various types to learn. Here are some reasons why we can learn more from books than watching TV.
First of all, we can read many types of book in library but TV programs are limited. What I mean is, If we really want to learn about the animals, I can watch the animal’s documentary. But the problem is, we need to wait until TV shows that kind of documentary. However, in library, we can read and learn what ever we want. Library has many kind of books. Also TV’s program running time is limited. But in library, we can read all day. Usually TV programs finish in 1 hour. So the information in that program might be less than books. Many informations are is compacted in the book. For example, I was watching the historical drama about King Sejong. But I feel felt the lack of the informations, because drama can’t show all of the history more specifically. Next day, I went to the library and read the a book about King Sejong. I realized there is boundary to in learning or gaining the information though the TV.
Secondly, books are providing provide more opportunity to learn than TV. If we don’t have TV, we can’t watch and gain the information, but we can get a book easily more easier. We can borrow or we can buy it . It’s cheaper than TV. Even though, people have TV they need to watch TV only in their home. We can’t take TV out. But books are easy to carry out. We can read a books in subway, bus, in cafe, home,, almost every where. There are very useful books that we can learn, such as autobiographies or philosophical books autobiography or philosophy book. For example, I really want to learn about the justice. Unfortunately, in my room, I don’t have a TV. But Therefore, I borrowed the book ‘Justice: what’s the right thing to do?’. At that time, I read it in the bus and subway. For that, I can save time and learn. Book can give us a lot of opportunity to learn in our daily life.
For these reasons, I believe reading book is best way to learn more than TV. TV is the worst way to learn and gain the information. There are so many obstacle to learn through the TV.
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