▶ Your Answer : The reading passage suggests three theories that explain how the ceramic discs were used. The lecturer, however, refers to the inaccuracies in each of these theories. To begin with, the lecturer argues that we can not find any stain or burn which might happened if discs have been used as a cooking pan, indicating that those were not for cooking utensils. This is in complete opposition to the point made in the reading passage, stating that ceramics were for eating. Furthermore, the second assertion, that the purpose of portrays were for musical instrument, is refuted by the lecturer. He explains that the ceramic is inappropriate material for drum. Ceramic can be easily broken with repeat hitting, so if they want to make drum, they should have utilized wood instead of fragile ceramic. This is why the lecturer contradicts the second point of the reading passage. Finally, regarding for the last point about using ceramic as a mirror, the writer of the reading passage argues that discs were for reflecting people. However, the lecturer contends that they were not mirrors because there is a decoration which is meaningless if it was used for mirror. Moreover, it would be much useful if they use filled water than copper itself.
점수: 22 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족한 통합형 에세이입니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가지고 있는 리딩과 리스닝이 어떻게 비교하고 반박을 하는 것인지를 보는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 각 단락에서 리딩에 대한 정보를 한 문장으로 만 서술하였는데. 한 문장으로 리딩에 대한 부분을 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박할 수 있는 부분들을 더 서술하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |