■ Direction Read the question below. You have 30 minutes to plan, write, and revise your essay. Typically, an effective response will contain a minimum of 300 words. ■ Question Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reason and examples to support your answer |
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▶ Topic : College students should be required to take basic economics courses, even though their majors are not economics. |
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▶ Your Answer : Some people take it for granted that taking economic courses even though their major is quite far from economics such as psychology or biology, is completely useless. However, contrary to this idea, it is clear that all college student should take some of basic economic lectures in their courses. The rationale behind this is that economics is important for well-being and help improving students’ own major. To begin with, economics takes a great role in our daily life. Since college is not only just for studying but also the place where students could learn how to live their life in a good way, learning financial standards or strategies will give them numerous advantages. Knowing how to manage their income or deal with their financial circumstances is (주어 = knowing 이기 때문에 3인칭 단수동사인 is가 동사로 옵니다) necessary. From my experience, one of my uncles (one of + 복수명사) was a very skillful doctor who earned almost millions of dollars by his professional surgery. However, he was just a master in medical field but in kinder garden level at economics, he suddenly lost all the money and became poor. If he studied a very basic of the economics basic economics, that would have never been happened. Moreover, integration economics with other major can make synergy. While studying economics, you don’t just learn how to calculate the money or how to draw the supply-demand graph. The essential part of economics is how to decide things logically. Rational decision is always the right choice. In one experiment, people who learn economics show more prudent decision compared to people who had never studied any of economics in their life. If well mixed with students’ own studying, it gave them a light form enhanced GPA to great career in their field. People always are needed to think logically. For example, imagine one can make decision considering the effect, cost, and outcome and the other just follow his or her feeling or mind. Who do you think can be a more successful person in their career? In conclusion, all students should take the simple economic courses during college. The reason is that economics can make your daily life rich and help you think logically anywhere, anytime which also can lead your life to be successful. |
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