■ Direction You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of The quality of writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and the relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words. ■ Question Summarize the points made in the lecture you just heard, explaining how they cast doubt on the points made in the reading
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▶ Your Answer :
The writer of the reading passage and professor in the lecturer discuss whether the two orcas are the same one. The passage explains that those whales are completely different creatures while the professor raises specific counterclaims and points out why they are identical. To begin with, the lecturer argues that under the different circumstances, such as the amount of sunlight that they have been exposed, could make them seem different, indicating that two killer whales are indeed, one. This is in complete opposition to the point made in the reading passage, stating that two whales are different beings because of their different colors. Furthermore, the second assertion that the distance between two were too far for the whales to be able to actually can swim is refuted by the lecturer. He explains that there are two types of this animal – hunting and fishing -, and the latter species are able to move 2000 miles. So swimming 15,000 miles doesn't matter for them. This is why the lecturer contradicts the second point of the reading passage. Finally, regarding for the last point about measuring age by their size, the writer of the reading passage argues that both of them having a similar size is (동사가 없습니다) a nonsense because of the time gap between them. However, the lecturer contends that knowing their age by their size is a misconception because whales stop growing after 20 years. |
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점수: 22/30
1. 각 문단 시작 전에 tab 버튼 눌러서 들여쓰기 해주세요.
2. 문법에서 전치사, 관사에 관한 오류가 자주 발생하고 있습니다.
이 부분 꼼꼼히 봐주시면 좋을 것 같습니다.
3. 그리고 디테일이 부족하다 보니 전체적으로 분량이 너무 짧습니다.
주어진 자료에서 최대한 많은 증거들을 찾아내셔서 적극적으로 에세이에 활용해주시면
훨씬 더 질 높은 글이 나올 것 같습니다.
수고하셨습니다. *^^*