▶ Your Answer :
There are some disagreements over whether
or not people should know about events happening around the world even though
the events are not related to them. Some people believe that people should
waste their time to know about the events happening around the world because people
are busy in the modern society. My view, however, is that the events around
the world is significant to people although the events have nothing to do with
them. This is because people can have interaction quickly and even deeply with
others. Moreover, people can acquire the wisdom from the events.
To
begin with, people can have the opportunity to have interaction with others in
an easy manner. To make new friends, people should make the sympathy that helps
people to feel like they have known for a long time. The sympathy is made of
mainly similar interest. People are easy to find the homogeneous interest from
the events happening around the world. This is due to the fact that people can
access to the internet and the news media wherever at no charge. Thus, the
topic in connection with the issues generating around the world makes it
possible for people to have more interaction and be familiar quickly. According to
the study conducted by a team at Korea University, most of people responded
that it was difficult to make new friends without knowing about the events
occurring around the world. This was because that with the help of advanced
technology, it is easy to access the internet and acquire a wide range of
information. Therefore, the events around the world play a significant role on
making the sympathy.
In
addition, people can accumulate assimilate the wisdom from the events. It is uncertain
whether people will be are confronted in similar situation that people usually watched
on TV in the upcoming future or not. People have a tendency to acquire a piece
of lesson from the past since it is possible that situation occurred in the
past is repeated in the future. Therefore, people can control without
distortion thanks to the events around the world when they are faced in
unprecedented case. For instance, when I was in high school, I watched certain
event in the news. The news showed that only boy survived in a lot of remains
that were generated by earthquake. The news explained how the boy survived even
though a building was disrupted. The reason was that the boy have watched a news
in relation with earthquake that occurred in Japan and the news showed that children
in Japan hid themselves ed under a desk to survive. When earthquake occurred, the boy utilized
the information and had a chance to survive.
Good (26–30) 서론 -around the world
첫번째 본문 -according to
두번째 본문 -assimilate 은 ~와 동화하다, accumulate은 쌓다, 모으다 -문맥상 뒤에 in the future 이므로 will be 가 더 적합합니다. -hide-hid-hidden
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