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People nowadays have many resources to get information when they need to
make important decisions on buying expensive material
products. That means, we should select from
where we should get information and mostly I rely on magazines rather than friends'
recommendation and reviews from online communities due
to the following reasons.
Firstly, I prefer to use mazagine magazines
because it's they’re reliable. In the online community there are lots of information
which is are written as an advertisement of
the object. Usually these kind of
commercials are wrriten written like an objective review by consumers so it's hard to know whether the review is real or just an advertisement. According to the artle an article of 'The Korean
Hearald' Herald’, there is an a research that proves that 40 percent of reviews are advertisements and the remaining 60 percent
among them hid that they get got subsidy
for reviews. This might cause misconception of the material's ability product and causes could
cause great losses to the consumer.
Secondly, I can get information which I should know from
information (무슨 뜻인지 파악하기
어렵습니다. 정보에서 얻을 수 있는 정보를 알 수 있다? 라고
적으셨어요.). Usually, magazines contain contents of the
products’ material's cost, ability and even about how to use it them.
That These help me to have make a fast and accurate decision on which item to buy.
In contrast, a friend's recommendation is
confined to a certain aspect. For example, I
needed to buy refrigerator which was quite expensive and asked friends who bought
that last the previous week to recommend
which one to buy. She just say said the design of hers was great and seems seemed like it is was
working well so she recommend me to buy it. It
wasn't sufficient for me to know the things I really wanted to know so I read a magazine.
To sum up, when
having making a major purchase there
should be accurate information to decide which one to buy. In my point of view,
the magazine is the most reliable and accurate
method to make a decision rather than friends' recommendation or online
reviews.
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