▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer says that violence in video games
is not so harmful. This casts doubt on reading
passage’s argument that violence in video games can negatively affect players.
First of all, the speaker argues that violent
video games sale has increased for several years, but juvenile delinquency has
decreased. The speaker explains that, the number of students fist fighting has
dropped for great percentage than several years ago without games. This contradicts
the point made by the article that playing violent video games lead to increase
on students fighting and bullying each other in school.
Secondly, the lecturer asserts that people can
learn complex social interaction by playing violent video games. The speaker
additionally says that, people can learn the sense of right and wrong, by
helping stranger and stealing other’s product in game, and they can even learn
cooperation and doing team work. This rebuffs the reading passage’s claim that
violent video games reward player’s violent behavior as upgrading their level
and giving new weapons .
Lastly, the professor asserts
that children, even 7 years old, can definitely differentiate between real life
and
fantasy. Also, there is M-rating
system, which means age limitation in games, children aren’t able to
participate in really violent and
inappropriate games. This counterpoint the aspect made by the reading
passage
that young children may have difficulty in comparing real life and game life.
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