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The reading passage contends that to increase tax increasing tax on tobacco has several advantages. On the other hand, the lecturer brings several points that contradict this argument. First, the speaker argues that it is unlikely that increasing the tax on tobacco will reduce the young smokers. This is beause because there is are black markets. The young can easily get cigarette from black salers sellers because they provide much cheaper one and do not check ID. This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that (reading 부분은 어디있나요? 빼먹은 거 같습니다) Second, according to the lecturer, raising the tax has no effect on recovering the environment. The reason is that the revenue from the raised tax would not directly mean that increasing funding on planting trees. Moreover, if the tobacco tax increase increases, its sales would decrease, causing declining the decline of the overall income. This refutes the reading passage's assertion that by earn earning more money from raising the tax, they will take care of the environment. The final point made by the lecture is that it is wrong to say that increasing the tax on tobacco will reduce poverty. Rather, the speaker says that tobacco industry contributes to the economy. This is supported by the fact that there are many jobs and business positions that relate to the tobacco business. If these work places disappear because of raising the tax, it would be likely to spur more poverty. This counters the reading passage's argument that the increase on the cigarette tax will bring a better result in economy. Good: 24~30 점수: 25 일단 첫 번째 바디에서 문제가 되는 부분이 있습니다. 그게 뭐냐 면 리딩의 부분이 빠져있습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요한것은 리딩과 리스닝에 대한 정보입니다. 리딩에 대한 정보가 부족하기 때문에 이 부분을 리딩에서 참고하시고 꼭 넣어주시길 바랍니다. 이것이외에는 제가 참석 한 것을 보면 문법적으로 틀린 부분이 있으니 보고 참고하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |