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Some may believe A lot of people think that most of the people should use public transportation(Just "transportation" includes all vehicles such as cars) during rush hours. However, in my opinion, it is inconvenient for to people who spends a lot of time travelling to use public transporation have traveled a lot of time. The cities don’t have enough public transportations provided for to the people to use.
Using public the transportations takes a long time because a lot of people use them. It is inconvenient when it comes to travelling for a long distance for travel a long way. For example, my mom(mother), who has a company in the crowded city has to head go to her company always at 9 am. It is almost 100km far away from her home. She drives an hour 1hours every morning. If there is a law prohibition(look up prohibition) to charge a fee to her, she will have to spend three hours on public transportation might go company in 3hours. Because a lot of people use transportation altogether. With the increased time and inconvenience, it is beneficial for people who spends a lot of time commuting to use their own cars. It is so uncomfortable to go to the company every morning.
If all of the people use public transportation during in rush hour time, there will are not be enough seats for the people to seat. Also, there are not enough Because the public transportations available are not enough for the crowded cities’ citizens. For instance, my brother always uses public transportation to go to his for going to the university. He is always worried about buses that don’t have the seats. Because the buses’ seats are insufficient. 문단 완성해 주세요
To sum up, charging the fee for the cars during the rush hour time is not a good idea because it takes a lot of the time and the number of public transportation is insufficient. In this regard, people should drive their own cars even while it is rush hour time.
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transportation 과 public transportation 은 다릅니다
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