Some people think that people should refer to the recommendation from friends and information from the Internet when they want to buy something. However, in my opinion, people can be satisfied and with the successfully shopping when they read the are given information from magazines ahead of buying a product. The reason is that a magazine it could give trustworthy information related to the product and when I have to request maintenance service, I could call the to service center noted as it is on the magazine.
To begin with, obtaining information through on a the magazine can be a reliable source to a buy product. A magazine They usually gives an objective and accurate information of the product while advices from friends and Internet community often do not. The information from the friends and comments from the users on the Internet cannot be fully reliable. For example, when I wanted to buy a smartphone, I just tried to get various information about a in terms of specific smartphone. I noticed my friends were using the phone I wanted When I was thinking about the product, it came to my mind that my friend were using the smartphone that I wanted to buy. So I just called my friend to and I could get some useful information about the product but those were not the things that I could rely on them since she gave me the only gave me information related to the design of smartphone (I called my friend to get some information on the phone, but only received unreliable information as the information was only related to the design of the phone). At that time, I wanted to change to a new cell phone with a high quality (high quality what? pixels? camera?) related to the practical function. so the information was deficient for me. Eventually, I had to search through magazines for more information through the magazines and finally got an I could get accurate information related to many other features of the smartphone. If I would have relied on the information which was given from my friend her, I would have not known about any of the funtions in the phone and would have hesitated to buy it could not understand the functions and hesitated to buy that one.
On top of that, after buying the product, we can contact could request the customer service about a related to the problem through calling the service center number of the product. In that case, we could call to the service center as it is mentioned in on the magazine. On the other hand, if we buy the product with only the comments on the Internet and recommendations of friends, we could lose the critical information related to the customer service. My example illustrates this. When I bought a laptop, the cover had a problem while closing found the problem in terms of closing cover of laptop. As But as soon as I discovered the defect, I found the magazine that I used for the purchase saw before the purchasing and I could find the information related to the customer service center. With the information, I received could get a new laptop with no problems at all. Without the help of the magazine, I could not have fixed it without delaying and wasting of my energy.
To sum up, magazines offer more credible information about products and they help the customers get service through the details for customers service requests about the problem. In this regard, I believe that obtaining information thorough a the magazines can be beneficial to make good purchase.
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