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There might be some people who believe that
parents should make strict rules for their children to make them succeed in
life. However, I disagree with the above idea from two subsequent ideas. First,
strict rules have a negative effect on developing creativity. Second, it can
make children to lose confidence.
To begin with, strict rules are not good
for children’s creativity. However, (However로 연결이 부자연스럽습니다) it is clear that creativity plays an
important role in success these days. Creative thinking makes people come up
with many possibilities, even including unrealistic situations (조금 어색한 표현입니다). To explain, Thus, creative
ideas help engineers produce many convenient products, such as smart phones, and flexible screens. For example, a study conducted by LG in 2012 with its 200
engineers as respondents, shows that strict environments make people to solve hard
problems. 80% of them said that free environments are better to work in when they should are inventing somethings new, they
want to work in free environments.
On top of that, strict rules can make
children to have low confidence. If children have low self-confidence, they are
likely to avoid new challenges which can make children less eager to learn and
set goals. If they set a goal and try to achieve it, they will succeed in life.
For instance, a poll done by Samsung innovation center, in 2015, shows the
importance of high confidence. 100 rich businessmen responded, and 70% of them
said that they tended to challenge everything. All of them seemed to be
confident. No one will oppose that they get success (해석이 어려운 어색한 문장입니다). It is clear that it is
hard to succeed in an environment where there are strict rules.
To sum up, strict rules affect creativity
negatively, and it is easy to lose confidence when children are confined in
strong rules. In this regard, I believe that parents should not set strict
rules for their children, if they wish to see their children succeed in life.
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