▶ Your Answer :In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's view that there is are possibilities that coal is exploited continuously in the future. However, the professor in the lecture gives several reasons as a rebuttal to refute the author's claim. First, the professor contends that it takes complicated process to mine the coal. The coal near the earth's surface is limited so people have to dig more than hundreds of meters tunnels to get coal. It needs a state-of-the-art technology and many workers. This casts doubt on the reading passage's assertion that coal can be mined easily so it can be used longer.
Next, the professor insists that it has some difficulties to move the coal. It is heavy and bulky. Also, it has to be transported seperately. It makes people spend more money to transport the coal than any other resources. This contradicts the author's suggestion that it takes less cost to carry the coal.
Finally, the professor argues that it does not play a pivotal role in increasing jobs. Coal companies are heading to reduce the cost for coal mining. As a consequence, they develop machines and equippments equipment (셀 수 없는 명사기 때문에 s붙이면 안됨) but decrease the labor of human. It will continue and later the jobs about coal drastically plummet. This refutes that coal industry is producing a lot of jobs. Good: 24~30 점수: 27 대채로 서로 대립되는 리딩과 리스닝을 아주 잘 비교하였습니다. 통합형 에세이를 서술 할 때에 가장 중요한 것이 바로 얼마나 적절하게 리딩과 리스닝을 비교했나 입니다. 지금 이에세이는 이러한 부분에서 아주 좋게 서술한 거 같습니다. 하지만 제가 리딩과 리스닝을 다 본것이 아니기 때문에 만약에 빠진 부분이 있으면 정보를 더 넣어주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |