▶ Your Answer :
People’s intellectual, social and personal
development is highly influenced by taking time into consideration. With this understanding,
I believe that it is important for people to take a lot of time when making an
important decision. This is because taking a lot of time when making an
important decision enables people to broaden their perspectives and enjoy a
better quality of life by strengthening competitiveness in their job
opportunities.
Firstly,
taking a lot of time when making an important decision is an excellent way of
enhancing insights and outlooks since people can have more time to
consideration. While growing up, many people are immersed by tons of
information and knowledge about this world through formalized education. The
problem that comes with this is that most of the information and knowledge is
conveyed with the source’s viewpoint and they can easily become shortsighted if
they do not have chances to have a lot of time and broaden their horizon. In
many cases, lack of consideration of stereotype is a serious concern that
hinders one’s success. Therefore, in order to gain well-balanced views and
become more cultured, they are encouraged to take a lot of time into
consideration. In this regard, I argue that taking a lot of time when making an
important decision allows people to broaden their perspectives.
Secondly,
people should take a lot of time when making an important decision so that they
acquire an outcompeting advantage over other candidates in a job market.
Nowadays, people face fierce competitions in a job market since there are too
many candidates with not so many jobs available. In order to become desirable
job applications and find success in their future career, they should take a
lot of time whenever they have to do. Interestingly, a renowned social
scientist in South Korea published an article in “The Korean Herald” last
Tuesday which claims that the 82 percent of 200 Korean leading recruiters
prefer people who have taken ing a lot of time when making decisions. The article
argues that the recruiters said that they tend to be more careful and
analytical. In the long run, careful attitude on work environment and
analytical thinking can enhance work performance, which result in helping their
job promotion and ultimately enjoy a better quality of life in terms of job
environments. I thought of this report because the results of the survey
resonated with my thoughts.
To
sum up, taking a lot of time when making an important decision is an important
quality for a person to have for the following reasons: broadening perspectives
and enjoying a better quality of life by strengthening competitive in society.
Consequently, the importance of my view cannot be underestimated for the
reasons I have mentioned above.
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