▶ Your Answer : In this set of issues the lecturer and the reading
passage discuss several aspects of whether hydropower will be more used because
of many benefits. The lecturer claims that the assertions made in the reading
passage are just absurd. This casts doubt on the reading passage's argument
that advantages of hydropower are exaggerated and it will not be widely used in
the future.
To
begin with, in response to the reading, the lecturer argues that hydropower
has ve many limits. The reason is that the global warming will lessen the size
and flow of river. Because of that reason, elecrticity productivity will be
decreased. This refutes the reading passage's claim that hydropower is an
unlimited source of energy.
On
top of that, the lecturer challenges the reading by stating that hydroelectric
facilities require a lot of maintenance. Specifically explaining, the silt will
be built d in the bottom of the water and it will cause the amount of water to be decreased.
Therefore, the silt must be removed regularly. This contradicts the reading
passage's argument that hydroelectric facilities do not need any maintenance.
Finally, the lecturer claims that hydroelectric dams can
cause catastrophic floods. In details, it can be collapsed and release a lot of
water. Moreover, dams are more devastating than natural floods because huge
amount of water released instantly. This opposes the reading passage's discuss
that hydroelectric dams can lessen the risk of flooding. In conclusion, the speaker challenges the explanation
from the reading passage on account of reasons stated above.
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