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The lecturer argues that Etruscan civilization in Italy has no relationship with the Etruscans who migrated from Turkey. This contradicts the reading passages that Etruscan civilization has much connection with Turkish. First, the lecturer says DNA research is not reliable as an ancient DNA of Turkey might be damaged during a long time. It is s almost thousands of years ago, so the archaeologists think that DNA must be contaminated. This casts doubt on the reading passages that demand DNA evidence found in remains of Etruscans from Turkey shows similar genetic markers. Second, the lecturer argues language is not showing the connection of the Etruscans and turkish. Tthe lecturer thinks any different language could have some similar alphabet, so some similar alphabets are not a evidence for the close relationship between the two different area which use different language. Moreover, Etruscans and turkish are is not in the part of same language family. This refutes the reading passages that Etruscans alphabet is same with turkish while it is not related with area like Greek. Finally. the lecturer asserts that talks about Etruscan’s funeral practices are not related with funeral custom found in Turkey. Etruscan civilization already had the funeral tradition that stored the ashes in urn when people died before turkish were migrated. This counters the reading passage that funerary practices in Etruscan civilization is only seen m in Tturkey, so they must be connected to each other.
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첫번째 본문 -its 는 it의 소유격 표현입니다. it is 로 바꿔주세요. -수천년 thousands of -reading passages-->reading passage 여러 개의 문단이지만, 하나의 reading passage를 다루고 있습니다.
두번째 본문 -주어가 복수 이므로 are
세번째 본문 -argue과 동의어인 단어들 몇개 외워서 돌려 써주세요. says, talks는 너무 단순한 표현입니다. -seem: ~로 보인다. seen: 발견되다, 포착되다. 등 문맥에 더 자연스러운 의미입니다. -대소문자 오류
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