▶ Your Answer : It is controversial whether improving schools is the most important factor in the successful development of a country. Some
people might argue that education is the most important factor meanwhile some
people will consider infrastructure, politicians, or some other thing as the
most important factor. I definitely agree that improving schools is the most crucial
factor. One reason is that it is the best investment for the future. Another
reason is that in order to make people civilized, an education of a good quality is the key.
First, fine education is the best investment for
the future which will lead to a successful development of a country. Even if
one person has much talent, that talent cannot be properly expressed or used,
if he does not get a proper education. For example, I once read a bibliography
of a person who had a marvelous talent in calculating money and managing
companies since young. But he did not have a chance to use that talent as he
was illiterate. Neither his surroundings nor the government provided him any
kind of proper education. This case shows that it can be a real tragedy when
lack of education limits people from showing their potential abilities. By
considering fine education as the key factor in the successful development of a
country, more people with potential abilities could actually utilize such
abilities.
Secondly, education makes people civilized
and civilized people make a country developed. This means that there are a
number of standards to meet in order to consider a country ‘successfully
developed’ and one major standard is whether citizens of that country are
civilized or not. According to a research done by the University of Seoul, 90
percent of students answered that students consider fine education as the most
important factor when deciding a person as cultivated or civilized. Moreover,
most of these students also said that the more citizens are civilized, the more
students feel like their country had developed successfully. This shows that
how much people are cultivated matter when deciding a successful country.
To conclude, improving schools is the most important
factor in the successful development of country. One is because it is the best
future investment and another is because education makes people cultivated. |