▶ Your Answer :
The lecturer asserts that some claims that try to explain
the horizontal posture pousture of
Sauropods are not convincing. This contradicts
the reading passage's claim that there are some explanation for the posture of
Sauropods.
First, the lecturer claims that Sauropods did not didn't have to offset the weight of its
tail. Its tail was not that heavy, if anything, it was slender. The
internal structure of the tails was even hollow and filled with air.
This casts doubt on the reading passage's claim that the dinosaurs
held its neck horizontally to balance the whole body.
Second, the lecturer contends that the insist that
its diet resulted in the phenomena is called into question. Because of
its big body, the Sauropods might need to eat a lot of vegetation. It does not doesn't seem that they
only ate marine flora. And its upright neck posture was good for
reaching the leaves on trees. This refutes the reading passage's
claim that the dinosaur’s dinosarus'
diet made the neck posture.
Third, the lecturer
argues that the weakness of the neck cannot can't
be an explanation for it. Although Sauropods'
neck muscles were weak, their shoulder muscles which can lift their neck were
strong enough to make the vertical posture of the necks.
This counters the reading passage's claim that it was impossible for Sauropods
to lift its neck with its weak neck muscles.
Good (24-26) 서론 -철자 오류
첫번째 본문 -축약형 지양해주세요. didn't-->did not
두번째 본문 -contends that과 insist that 같은 뜻입니다. 하나 지워주세요. -축약형 지양 -철자 오류
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