▶ Your Answer : Some people think that today’s life is not easier when we compared to past. However, in my opinion, it is much more comfortable for two reasons. First of all, people can use advanced IT technology. In addition, there are more convenient transportation systems in these days. To begin with, people nowadays can search information or make new friends by using computer. In the past, people had to go libraries to get sources. However in these days, they can get a lot of knowledge that they need with one mouse click. Also, people can communicate with people more easily. They can talk to their friends who live abroad through e-mails or social media. Thus, today’s lives are more comfortable than those of the past. For example, my grandfather told me about his story when he was young. When he received an assignment about an insect, he had to go out to observe the insect in person. He also mentioned that he spent all day on doing his assignment. On the other hand, when I got an assignment about an insect, I just turned on my computer and searched about it easily. It took only one hour to get information about it. As a result, it is evident that developed IT technology such as computer and the internet makes people’s lives much easier than the past. On top of that, people can use convenient transportation system in these days. In the past, people had to walk or take transportation with expensive fee. Furthermore, buses were always filled with a lot of people since there was no subway in the old days. However, we have the subway nowadays, so we can move to other places conveniently. Moreover, people can lessen their financial burden because transportation fee reduced a lot. For instance, according to a survey conducted by UCLA’s research department, about 80 percent of participants reported that they had a lot of problems with transportation system in the past. The reason for this was that they did not have many buses and subway lines and their system was not perfect. Thus, it took much time to come back home during commuting time. They also mentioned that they had to use a big amount of money on transportation fee. Consequently, it turns out that insufficient and imperfect transportation system made people’s lives uncomfortable in the past. To sum up, people have developed IT technology and better transportation system nowadays. In this regard, I believe that people who live in these days are more comfortable than those of in the past.
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