▶ Your Answer :
Some people might agree with the idea that technology
has made our children less creative than in the past. However, I personally
believe that it is not a good
idea. There are two reasons. First, children can
invest the time saved by technology to learn to be more creative. Second, children can use technologies in more creative ways.
(technology gives several methods which children could use creatively.)
To begin with, technology can
help students to save time and think more creatively. There are many ways that children can use technologies to save the
time needed to accomplish their goals. (a number of technologies that
children could get aids. These aids make decrease time used to accomplish
somethings.) Therefore, they can use this
time to do other creative (thinking and)
activities. For instance, let me bring up my
personal experience (I talk about me and my friend) to elucidate my
point. I always used technology like a computer
to do my assignments. Unlike me, my friend
never used a computer to do his homework. (technology and did all of homework
by himself.) When our teacher gave an assignment that required
creative thinking, (some sort of creativity,) I did very well it.
However, she could not finish her work on time.
(in limited time.) This was because she wasted her
time on minor things, so she did not have enough time. In this case, it is
undeniable that technology can be helpful for
students to be more creative. (would help children to be more creative
by making time saved.)
On the top of that, there are many creative ways that
children can use. (Technology insists new
horizons of contemplating for students. 무슨 뜻
인지 모르겠네요.) By using diverse kinds
of technology, students could think of different
ways. For example, a study was conducted by a group of educators
to determine whether technology influences
children's creativity. There were two groups. First group was consisted of
children who got help from technology. (and apparatus.) Second group was formed
of children who did not have any technology.
(and apparatus.) After some tests,
researchers concluded that the first group showed a
higher creativity level (more creative) than
that of the second group in solving problems. In the following interviews, students replied
that they could answer the questions differently with
technology. This study proved that technology gives a positive influence
to student's creativity.
To sum up, using technology helps
children save time and improve their creativity. In this regard, I strongly
disagree with this idea.
Writing Score (0-30): 17-20
Score (0-5): 2.50-3.00
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