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Most students have some anxieties
about surroundings of study. Especially, it is important whether they study alone
or with a group of classmate. In my opinion, I prefer to study with other
students. This is because we can get a help each other and also have a
motivation to study by them. for the following two subsequent reasons.
To begin with, in case of challenges,
other students could give a hand for us about the problems, vice versa. To
explain, we cannot know everything and we have different parts for our
knowledge and ability in study. For example, in high school, I had hard time to
solving a problem in mathematics. Despite of my pride about mathematical
ability, it couldn’t be solved alone. I asked for my classmates to help determining
a correct of this problem. As we think about that by sharing individual
knowledge, it extremely could be solved. This example shows studying with other
classmates is more helpful to study.
On top of that, they stimulate you to
study harder. To specify, we are usually hard to start studying alone. However,
if there are people who study with us, it is easy to begin studying and it makes
us much harder to studying. A study conducted by Education Office of Korea supports
my point. They track 200 of students having similar grade over one semester.
Half of them studied themselves and in same time others studied with. The
result is very intriguing. While grade of the former is rarely changing, that
of the latter is drastically increasing. Some students studying with their classmates
mention that they were stimulated by seeing other behavior to study hard.
To sum up, we can get helps to solve
challenges and motivation to study longer and harder from other classmates. For
these reasons, I believe that group-study is more helpful to students.
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