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Many students study for their future and they want to be a good at studying. So there are several medias that help student study well and one of the most popular vehicle is smart devices. Some people might say that student cannot learn more effectively with the aid of smart devices. However, in my opinion, I think using the smart devices is one of the best way for educational purpose, wich I will explore in the following essay. To begin with, the smart devices offer various type of study tools. Students can use online lectures and study application through electronic gadget such as computer, smartphone, electronic dictionary and even television. I will give my personal experience as an example of my opinion. last year, my company had a meeting with American company and I was demanded to to communicate in English with the company. I had to prepare for the meeting in 2 weeks. But I knew I can speak eglish but had poor pronunciation. Thus I downloaded and used Eglish phonics application everyday. In result my pronunciation improved so I was able to make a good conversation with the company. On top of that, student can manage their time effictiently. To use smart device would be very good for the students who live far away from their school and use much time to commute. Because the device can be used wherever and whenever students want. For instance, I originally studied only with the textbooks so I did nothing while I was going to shcool by the subway. However, after I download vedio lecture in my phone, I got to watch the video lecture on the subway when commuting to school. To sum up, distinct study tools are provided by electronnic gadget. Moreover, the time can be handled efficiently by students using smart devices. In this regard, smart gadget can give several possitive effect when students study. 점수: 27 지적할 부분이 없는 독립형 에세이입니다. 독립형 에세이에서 가장 중요한 부분을 차지하는 것은 설득력 입니다. 지금 이 에세이는 설득력 부분에 있어서는 완벽히 숙지가 되어 있는 에세이입니다. 각 단락의 구체적 설명들을 통하여서 왜 전자기기들이 사람들이 공부를 하는데에 있어 효과적으로 잘 보여주는 거 같습니다. 수고많으셧습니다. | |
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