▶ Your Answer : Some people think that it is best to watch movies that teach us about the real world. On the other hand, in my opinion, films that do not include real-life lessons are just as good for the following two reasons.
To begin with, watching movies that are not based on real-life problems is a great way to relieve stress. People have a variety of factors that cause them to worry, such as school, jobs, and personal relationships. These type of movies help us forget about these issues. For instance, I recently felt a lot of stress when I was studying for TOEFL. Even during times when I was not actually studying, I found myself worrying about the test and I could not completely relax. I decided to take a break one day and watch an action movie. For two hours, I completely forgot about the test and enjoyed it. For this reason, I disagree with the statement.
Furthermore, even though films might provide lesson about real life, it can be misleading. In fact, movies based on real life are still fictional and dramatic. This means that their portrayals are often inaccurate that people can have biased impressions. To be specific, according to a survey, movies often portray Muslims as violent and dangerous, which encourages negative stereotypes about them. This can lead to anti Islamic atmosphere in society. Without considering this possibility, the statement is unsupportive.
To sum up, I disagree with the statement that the best films are those that give lessons about real life. watching moves that are not based on real life problems is great way to relieve stress. In addition, movies are fictional and dramatic that it can be misleading.
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