Certainly, a deep understanding of history plays a significant role in people's lives in the many of the places where they work and play. Some people might say that all university students should be required to take history courses no matter what their field of study is. However, in my opinion, forcing students to take history course regardless of their majors would not bring a good result in their lives. There are reasons as follows for the following two subsequent reasons.
First and foremost, when students have to attend mandatory history classes in university, they will have less time for their field of study one has less time to study own field. Moreover, some students who are not good at history can receive bad grades and it can affect their future career since it can appear on their transcript which is the main criteria for job applying affecting badly on choosing future job as the grade plays important role. Also, nowadays, large company want candidates with more practical skills, such as computer programming and accounting. In this context, it is hard to say students can benefit from spending time to memorize all the names of the kings and historical events. For example, when my sister was university student, she suffer suffered (과거형으로 시작하는 부분들은 시제들도 과거형으로 서술하시길 바랍니다) physically and mentally from tight schedule and highly competitive environment. She was already busy with studying many of academic subjects which she need to take to graduate. However, her university announced that all students need to take 6 credits from history department from next semester. Even though her constant efforts, she got C from the ancient Japanese history class. Unfortunately, this lowered her overall GPA and she fail to apply her summer internship where she really wanted to work, just because she could not satisfy minimum qualification. On the other hand, her friend, John who is from another university, could focus on building his resume by adding related skills since his university encouraged students to specialize on their major. Consequently, he received more than five internship offers.
To sum up, taking history classes without consideration of students' aptitude and interest can have negative impact on students' school life.
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한 단락에 너무나 많은 정보를 넣으려고 하는 독립형 에세이입니다. 이러한 경향은 에세이로 하여금 장황하게 만듭니다. 에세이가 장황해지다 보면 본레 자기가 전달하려고 했던 의미들이 변질되게 됩니다. 따라서 지금 이 에세이에서 필요한 것은 좀 더 간결하게 본인의 주장을 전달하시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다.