▶ Your Answer :
It has been often suggested that teacher
should not show their social or political views to students in class. I firmly
agree with this idea. The reasoning behind this is that students are teenager,
so they are not mature to make a rational judgment. In addition, teacher should take a have neutral attitude.
To begin with, that most students are teenager,
so they are not mature enough for making a sound judgment. In other words, students are too young to think and express their own
ideas about societal and political issues in social and political. Also, they are insufficient to think by oneself
because they are not enough to study. (Repeated sentence) Therefore, they can be influenced by others’
opinions easily such as Usually teachers who are regarded as smart and respected people by
students. When teacher present their appear own idea, they can be easily influenced by them. To take
my experience as an example, when I was a middle school student, my teacher told class that money
is a the best thing to live future. His belief has much influenced me. I have highly
evaluated money until now by his affection.
Secondly, teachers should take a have neutral attitude when teaching students.
In other words, the teacher’s original role is to teach teaching a certain of knowledge and to help helping students grow self-esteem and right insight to live by oneself. Teacher
should be neutral. What I mean is teachers should not lean on to one side. If it happened,
teachers can not help students grow self-esteem and right insight. (Awkward) For example, To take my
example, my high school teacher did not show his personal opinion in class by appear his opinions. He said always saying that “I do
not tell my opinion on issue that happens in the world. How do you think about these
issues?”. On account of his solicitude and willingness for good teaching, I thought about these issues continuously and could it can lead to reinforce thinking skills ability. After becoming being an adult, thinking ability continuously is main role when I have been
faced with serious problems. I can could find breakthrough with this ability by thinking ability.
To conclude, I am convinced teachers should
not show their social or political views to students in class. This is because a the teacher who
teaches teenagers has a big influence on students about all the matters addressed in class how they look at the world. Moreover, a teacher should be neutral in helping students think by oneself.
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