▶ Your Answer :Most people say that today more people are overweight than ever before because of many causes.In my opinion, today more people are overweight than ever before by developing technology. I feel this way for two reasons which I will explore in the following essay.
To begin with, developing technology of cooking makes (주어 동사 불일치) people overweight. In countries all over the globe, today most people want to eat delicious food to enjoy their life. In the past, however, people could not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) eat delicious food because they did not have practical technology to cook tasty food.For example, when my father was young, he was thin because he could not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) eat something food that had much nutrition and good taste.The era he was young, there was no any technology to make food easily and tasty.However,today people can eat delicious food by developing cooking technology. Thus many people can eat food easily. As a result, people overeat to enjoy fullness, so feeling, people have been overweight. Additionally, my friend Kim's (대소문자 구분) hobby is eating delicious food so he is really fat. This example demonstrates today more people are overweight than ever before.
Secondly, developing technology of transportation makes (주어 동사 불일치) people overweight. Today many comfortable (올바른 품사) transportation methods are created by developing technology. However the vehicle makes people overweight. This is because, today people use comfortable car to move around so amount of people exercise activity was reduced. My grandmother's experience demonstrates this concept. When my grandmother was a young, car was really rare transportation because of its expensive price.Thus most people had to walk to move a long distance.Although people could not (줄임말 사용을 지양해주세요) feel comport, they could upgrade their muscle and get healthy.Thus most people of that era were not overweight.However, today people use the car to move around and people use the bus to move for just three hundred meters. Additionally, I am overweight because of lack of exercise.I always use bus when I go everywhere.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that today more people are overweight than ever before by developing technology.This is because developing technology of cooking makes people overweight and developing technology of vehicles make people overweight.
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