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Some people think that trying out several different occupations is better than committing to a long-term job. However, in my opinion, it is better to devote to one job for a long time, considering that we can learn about the job more profoundly and create a bond with those who are working in the same job. To begin with, in the process of trying out different jobs, at best we can gain each job's knowledge only superficially. On the other hand, if we are fixed on a specific job, we can be more proficient at the job. For example, I will talk about my brother and my brother's friend to elucidate my point. In the case of my brother, he majored in English education and worked in an (관사 a -> an) English academy to keep his career in relation to English education. Unlike him, his friend tried anything he was interested in and experienced a lot of fields. After graduating, the friend still is struggling to find a job that is most exciting to him. However, my brother continually have worked in the job he chose and is doing his career successfully. It shows how important it is to focus on a particular job and strive in it. Moreover, it is possible to keep a favorable relationship with someone working in the job same with one's own by keeping one's job continually. It is the help and advice from colleagues in the same work field that is really helpful to one's career. For instance, I will give an example of myself. Before entering university, I had a stereotype that it is necessary to get along with people who are in other majors and diverse fields. However, after the entrance, I have realized that it is those who are in my major who are (주어 동사 불일치) able to give practical assistance for me and it is recommended to keep intimate relationship with them. Had it not been for this experience, I would not have been able to realize that closer bond with people in the same field, attained by attaching to the job for a long time, is important for my career path.
To sum up, expertise knowledge and closer relationship with coworkers can be attained by putting one's own energy in one job. In this regard, I firmly assert that being immersed in a particular career path is not an option but a (관사 필요합니다) necessity. |