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An international organization started imposing ecocertification to wood companies that meet high ecological standards by conserving resources and recycling materials. According to the reading passage, the wood companies in the United states will try to get ecocertification. However, the speaker said differently and there are three points. Firstly, one of the reasons in the reading passage that the writer said that is that American consumers are exposed to too much intensive advertisements. Therefore, even though wood companies advertise their products by using “exoxertified”, the consumers will not trust that much. However, the speaker said that they don't treat all advertising the same.(How?) Also, Americans who are ecologically minded are likely to react very positively. A second point from the article writer is that ecocertified wood will be more expensive than the regular wood to get ecocertification. Then, customers will pay more cost to buy ecocertified wood. It will make customers buy uncertified wood so wood companies will prefer to keep the prices lower. In contrast, the speaker said that if the price difference between two products is small, Americans will be rely on other factors (What is it?) rather than price. Lastly, the writer said that American wood businesses sell most of their products in the United States and they don’t affect to other countries so pursuing certification would not make sense for them. However, the speaker said that American wood companies should pay attention to wood business internationally for foreign competition.(Sounds awkward) Also, if they capture some customers who are interested in ecocertified products. Eventually, there will be foreign companies that want to join into the American market. In conclusion, the writer has a negative opinion on the ecocertification because American customers don’t trust the advertising in general. Also, products would be more expensive and wood companies are for just Amercian consumers. However, the speaker disagrees with it because not all American custromers treat advertising like that. Also, increasing price would not affect that much and wood nusinesses should captured some customers for foreign competition.
채점기준표 | Grammar | Contents | Example | Coherence | 점수 | 3 | 3 | 2 | 2 | Score | Fair 18-23 |
- exoxertified --> 의 뜻은 무엇인가요? 올바른 spelling인지 먼저 check하여 주시고 설명으로 뒷받침해주세요. - american 이 act positively 하는 것에 대한 예를 들어주세요. - price 대신 기대는 other factors이란 무엇인가요? - 'wood business internationally for foreign competition' 부분을 trade 와 internationally competitive로 나눠서 설명하면 좋을 것 같습니다. - 통합형에서는 결론이 불필요하므로 생략해주시면 되겠습니다.
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