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The reading passage argues that these days the level of the culture is declining because people are less reading the literature for three reasons. Passage comes up with the concept of the intellectual stimulation, the level of the culture and the less support for the literature. However, lecturer opposed this assertion with the different point of the view. First of all, lecturer argues that literature is not the only intellectual stimulant. She gives some examples of intellectually stimulating books that are not literature like books about the science and political issue. This is contradicted with the reading passage's assertion that reading less literature means the less intellectual stimulation. Additionally, professor points out the fact that movie, song or other types of media are also the good forms of culture in these days. For example, hearing to the brilliant music also can be count as the great cultural experience. This calls into the question the idea presented in the passage that decline of literature can be interpreted as the declining level of the culture.
Finally, professor claims that trend of declining literature and less support to literature are partially caused by authors themselves. She says that since modern literature is intentionally hard to understand, authors should blame themselves for the less audience. This contradicts the passage's idea that less audience is the reason of the less support for the literature.
Good: 24~30 점수: 24 리딩에 대한 정보가 많이 부족합니다. 통합형 에세이에서 중요하게 보는 것은 리딩과 리스닝의 적절한 비교입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 리스닝에 대한 설명은 충분하게 되어있지만 리딩의 정보가 부족합니다. 한 문장으로 끝내는 것 보다는 리스닝을 좀 더 반박해 주시길 바랍니다. 수고많으셨습니다. |