▶ Your Answer : Some people say that messy rooms are more helpful to make greater success than those neat one. But I think that tidy rooms are much better for success. Because clean rooms increase concentration and allow people work efficiently. for the following two subsequent reasons
To begin with, tidy rooms can enhance our concentration. To be specific, when we are in an arranged place, we are inclined to not think about unnecessary things not to think about unnecessary elements. This place which is clean and has no distractions makes us immersed in only one task. In my case, I can't cannot (독립형 에세이에서는 줄인말을 서술하면 안됩니다) start easily my assignments and can't focus on what I have to do. On the other hand, In a neat room, there are no some obstacles which make me not concentrated, I devote myself to assignment deeply.
On top of that, working in efficient way is also important for great success. Tidy rooms make it possible to work efficiently by giving us efficient environments. In a clear space, we do not need to waste time to doing unnecessary tasks, in doing unnecessary things managing time easily and making higher completion of what we have to do. For example, we do not spend long time searching for stationary stuffs in a gloomy room. As a result, we can use our time on important and must completed thing.
To sum up, tidy rooms make our concentration higher and give us more efficient way to work. In this regard, tidy rooms are more important to achieve success than messy rooms.
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