▶ Your Answer :
Given passage proposes three weak points of
use tamarisk beetle to eradicate tamarisk tree which consumes of a lot of
water. However, professor says that those points are overstated with his own
reasons.
First, according to the article, this
invasive insect is hard to control and in consequences, this can provoque a
greater environmental problem. But the professor says that since this insect
has only one food source and has so many predators, it is not possible to cause
such a crisis.
Next, the professor also mentions that
those beetles are still efficient to use, since it can reduce water consumption
of the plant significantly by eating leaves. As insects digest leaves it can
reduce hyposynthesis in the tree and this can bring an enormous decrease in
water usage in the tree. This idea contradicts the article, which criticizes
that the eradication process takes too much time and gives no critical damage
on the plant.
Finally, the risk of wildfire described in
the lecture is also denied by the professor. Rather he indicates that this risk
is not relatively severe because there are experts in that area, and they
sometimes set a fire to remove those undesirable bushes to prevent wildfire.
Good: 24~30 점수: 27 통합형 에세이에 가장 적절한 에세이인거 같습니다. 통합형 에세이에서 가장 중요하게 보는 것 중에 하나는 한 주제에 대하여서 서로 다른 정보를 가진 리딩과 리스닝이 서로 어떻게 반박하고 비교하는 지를 보여주는 것 입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우는 각 리딩과 리스닝의 정보들이 충분하게 나타내고 있습니다. 충분하게 언급 하고 있기 때문에 주제에 대하여서 서로 어떤 주장을 가지고 있는 지 잘 알 수 있었던 에세이였습니다. 수고많으셨습니다.
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