▶ Your Answer : In the reading passage, there is ample support for the author's claim that three reasons on why the stranding of whales happen. However, in the lecture, the professor gives several reasons as a rebuttal to the author's point. First, the professor contends that it is unlikely that whales become strained by the wind pattern. This cannot be explained (제가 지문을 접하지는 못해서 이 글에만 의존해서 일단은 자연스러운 표현으로 바꿔드렸는데, 100프로 확신할 수는 없지만 이게 맞을 겁니다.) stranding Stranding occurs in a variety of places which have unique wind patterns. This can't be explained. This casts doubt on the reading's passage that the whales are stranded because they follow the food carried by the flow of water Which which is created by wind patterns. Next, the professor insists that reaching to the beach because of suffering is problematic. This He/she states that the author's opinion cannot explain the situation that healthy whales are also stranded. If the whales don't have any disease, when they are close to the ashore, they can move back to the ocean by using their own power. This counters the reading passage's assertion that illness results in whale strandings because the whale is too weak to swim properly. Finally, the professor maintains that it is not persuasive that whales can't detect moderate gradient of the coastline. If it is true, most of the whales should have been stranded in every beach. Also, whales which resides (주어와 동사의 수는 일치해야 합니다.) in shallow coastal water are seldom found in being stranded. This refutes the reading passage's argument that some geological features make whales disturbed because they can't perceive the slight slope by their sonar detecting systems.
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