▶ Your Answer : agree Although what movies tell would be different with each other, nevertheless they naturally contains many aspects of their own countries. (인트로에 적절치 않는 에세이입니다. 인트로에서는 훅이 나오고 상대방 의견이 나온 후 자신의 의견이 나와야하는 데 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에는 자신의 의견조차 명시되어 잇지 않습니다) Firstly, movies usually show their culture. Movies show not only by themselves but also with statistic way. China, which has long and prosperous history, love to make movies regarding its history. Though those movies people can see traditional marshal arts, kingdoms and wars as well as Chinese people's history loving culture. Japanese movies shows their temples and its various kind of gods or ghosts. With this tendency, people can see Japanese unique religious culture. Secondly, movies also manifest about their society. A Korean movie, "Little Forest" which currently released argues how how difficult to live in Seoul these days. An Indian movie, "Dangar" shows how women are threated in both family and society. Thirdly, people can easily find ethic of each country mostly through action movies. We can find who are bad as well as who are good because many times movie shows distinctive difference of each sides. Especially, "Avengers" proved what U.S. think of ethic of its own which is U.S.' universal ethic standard. Back ground of Marvel movies is usually not limited in one country but world and sometimes beyond the earth. And its heroes enforce their own ethics to other states as well as other creatures. Lastly, many movies gives lessons of countries' history naturally and people's perspectives over it. A Korean movie, "I can speak" is about a old lady who was a comfort woman during Japanese colonized period. It shows how she suffered through entire of her life time. People who watch this move might feel bad about what Japan has done to Korea even today. Many Korean movies regarding Japanese colonized period have made huge successes because when those movies are releases Korean people tend to go to watch those movies in theater not in their house. Korean people think they should watch those movies as Korean.
Fair: 17~23 점수: 18 독립형 에세이에서 적절치 않는 거 같습니다. 독립형 에세이에서 가장 중요시 보는 것 중에 하나는 에세이의 구조입니다. 지금 이 에세이 같은 경우에 있어서는 구조를 철저히 무시한 거 같습니다. 인트로도 적절치 하지 않았고 결론도 없습니다. 또한 이유를 네 개를 서술하였는데 이 네 개를 통해서 작성자가 무엇을 전달하려고 하는 지를 잘 모르겠습니다. 따라서 구조 부터 변화시키고 에세이를 서술해야 할 거 같습니다. 수고많으셧습니다. |