▶ Your Answer :
In
my country, there is an old saying that "When you meet a tiger in the
forest, you can find an escape from it if you do not lose your control."
It means that even if I face in some difficult situations, I need to try to not
be in a panic and keep concentrating to find the solution. Therefore, in the
end, I can find the right way. In this sense, I have two steps to manage my
problems well, controlling my negative emotions and finding alternative options
quickly.
First of all, When I am in some unpleasant
problems, I totally try to remove my personal negative feelings and concentrate
on the objective facts that are happening right now removing personal negative feeling is important. That is because it is
effective to find a solution Such process is effective in finding solution. In my personal experience, I met some obstacles
when I traveled in India. I made a plan to go to Agra from New Deli by a city
bus. However, the day when I try to move to that city, the bus company suddenly
stroke. There were no other buses to go to Agra directly. At first, I was so
disappointed and depressed, because I really wanted to see the Palace in Agra.
However, a few minutes later, I cheer up myself and eliminate all the negative thinking
and emotions. Moreover, I focus on the facts. Thus, I was able to make my
thought. "The problem is just from the bus company, then maybe I can go
there by other transportation."
Secondly, I try to find many alternative ways
to try to solve the problems and think about the pros and cons. Through these
ways, I can select the best options. In the situation that I mentioned above, I
tried to get diverse information to go to Agra. Finally, I got three options.
First, going to another city and taking the bus to go to Agra. Second, going
there by airplane. Third, going there with a family who also had a plan to go
Agra by their car. For me, the first and second option was too expensive, I was
not able to afford it. In contrast, going together with strangers was free even
though I was not sure about them. With these pros and cons, I select the third
option and succeeded to go to Agra.
Therefore, one of my problem-solving
strategies is reducing negative emotions and only focus on finding other
options. With these strategies, I can get the best answers about the problem.
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