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Your Answer :
Some people might say that long distance would be helpful for people to recognize the
importance of their relationship. However, in my opinion, people must spend
more time together in order to develop their relationship for the following
reasons: first of all, living apart from each other
(away) cannot lessen differences between the two
people, and secondly, having time together would increase
(promote their) intimacy.
To begin with, if people
don’t spend time together, it is impossible to find what each person likes to
do for fun. (were away, they could not make their discrepancies lesser
like different hobbies or preference.)l In order to do this, people should do
diverse activities together and learn (know)
what the other person likes to do. (about
their difference in the activities.) By doing so, people
can avoid unnecessary conflicts and respect each other’s preferences. (they would be able to avoid certain
activities or attitudes which the friend do not like, and as a result, they can
appeal more positively to each other.) In this sense, I will take an example of
mine. (Last time,) My friend and I (me)
lived in different regions for a long time. As a result, when we met again, we
did not know about each other’s interest or preferences.
To be specific, I did not know that my friend became to dislike horror movies,
but I recommended her to go to watch the horror
movie I enjoyed. (consistently.) As a consequence, she was so annoyed
because she thought that my (such) recommendation was rude and did not meet me
for a while.
On top of that, having more time together
would be helpful for human relationships
since people can make a lot of special memories and build intimacy. These
things would be formed only by the activities
(which) they do (did) together. (because) The experiences give them common
memories, and people tend to consider that sharing good memories is something
special. I know this from my personal experience. When I was an undergraduate student, I participated in a
drama club. (Me and club members) The club members
and I created several plays together, and made a lot of memories in the
process. For example, we all remembered some mistakes which we made on the stage, (in stages,) and these memories were
present only (for) to us. These memories
enabled us to consider our relationship (was) special, and as a result, we have
been able to maintain our relationship until
now.
To sum up, long distance cannot minimize people’s differences
in terms of hobbies or interests. However, spending (having) a lot of time with
each other promotes their intimacy and gives them special memories. In this
regard, I firmly believe that people should spend time (to) together as much as
possible in order to make closer relationships.
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Writing Score (0-30): 18-20
Score (0-5): 2.75-3.00
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