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Outline
1. 운동은
학업 성적을 높여준다
Ex) 연구
– 학업 성취도 50퍼센트 이상 높음
2. 운동
장비 비싸고 기부문화 없음
Ex) 스키수업
– 장비 노후
There is a controversial debate that university athletic department
needs to receive the same amount of funding as university libraries. This is an
intriguing question because opinions concerning this issue can be different
relying on the individual perspectives. In my opinion, I agree with the opinion
that the funding of university athletic department should be the same amount
with university libraries. This essay will explain why I think this way.
First of all, exercise is helpful for health as well as study. To be
specific, people know that when people exercise regularly, It decreases the
risk of illness such as cancer and heart disease. There are many students who
do not exercise regularly because they do not have enough time to do sports.
However exercise steadily also not only helpful for health but also increase
the scholastic achievements. According to a study done by ITS Institution of
Education, university students group who regularly exercise get 50 percent
higher grade than other students group who do not exercise in research. This is
because when students exercise steadily, oxygen that occurs as doing sports
makes students concentrate on study. This clearly shows the importance of doing
exercise in order to focus on a study as students study.
Secondly, in many universities, athletic
equipment is obsoleted. To be specific, exercise equipment and physical
facilities are so expensive to students and even many universities do not care
about athletic equipment and gym. The universities should invest and care about
various exercise equipment and these facilities such as many pieces of
equipment of ski or golf and grounds of football or baseball. For example, when
I took a ski class, most of the equipment were obsoleted, I had to use rusted
ski equipment. It makes me concern about safety. On the other hand, the
library's donation system is active and better than athletic department. Many
alumni or local residents donate books and money to the university library. It
proves that people should care about athletic department such as equipment or
condition of the gym.
In conclusion, I firmly believe that it is necessary for university
athletic department to receive the same amount of funding as university
libraries. All things considered, it is my belief that my argument regarding
this topic has been efficiently and precisely delivered with the reasons
mentioned above. Never should we forget that this issue may have a huge impact
on student's future. |